Core Narrative 4

Story Concept

'''Emily is a nurse for the US Army during WW2. The war has just end and she comes home to the news her husband has died in a steel mill accident. Leaving her to be a single mother to care for her child. Things are tough and work is scarce now for women now that the war is over. During a routine doctor check up it is discovered that her child has polio to which there is no cure. She’s heard of a new world that has been discovered that has advanced medicine and decides to journey there.'''

'''        Emily and her child are part of the first wave of people trying to reach this new world known as Acentius. She sells everything she can to get enough to pay for the trip from Chicago to the Bermuda Triangle. Things are looking up as they finally make the journey. Once they make it into Acentius things are a bit more hectic than was previously thought. The sheer amount of people coming in is overwhelming. They’re put in a temporary camp to wait for processing into being allowed into Acentius. During this time the polio is worsening. To help her cope with the stress with her child she begins to help around the camp using her medical knowledge to help people in the camp. Through her perseverance people throughout the camp begin to acknowledge her and help speed up her processing time'''

'''        Her and her child are finally allowed to enter the society of Acentius fully. Emily’s child is given a medical overview and given treatment to reverse the effects of polio completely. Leaving it now them to live in peace in this new perfect world.''' The Hero

Emily, a WW2 nurse who is recently widowed

 

The physical goal

Get to Acentius

 

The Emotional goal

To save her son Isaac

 

Personal obstacle

The stress of having her husband dead and now her child dying

 

The Villain

Time is the main villain

 

Justification

Time needs no justification

 

Supporting cast

Her son Isaac. Other people making the journey

 

Locations

.Chicago, The Triangle, New Haven, Processing Camp, Remedium

 

Logline

A WW2 nurse comes home from the war to find her husband has died. Leaving her to care for her child who has degenerative disease. Now she must make the journey to a strange new world that promises a miracle before time runs out.

 

Additive Comprehension

Why humans want to go to Acentius so much, their own personal reasons for leaving Earth. Also is the backstory for Isaac and why he is so loyal to the Acentians

 

Type of Series?

Kindle Book Series with volume one being free